McShake and Breast Milk

Jun 8, 2016 11:05
Since there is a McDonald in my university, I sometimes go there and buy McShake.

McShake is known that it's hard to drink, but there is a reason.

According to the McDonald's study, the most delicious speed that you feel when you drink something is same as the speed of drinking breast milk.

The diameter of the McShake's straw is adjusted to achieve the breast milk speed.

When you drink McShake, you might recall the days when you were babies unconsciously.

Furthermore, you might demand it instinctively.

McShake could be a kind of drug.
マックシェイクと母乳

私の大学にはマクドナルドがあるため、私はたまにマックシェイクを飲みます。

このマックシェイクは飲みにくいことで有名ですが、それには理由があります。

マクドナルドは研究で、人間は何かを飲むとき、もっとも美味しいと感じるスピードは母乳を飲むスピードであると結論付けました。

マックシェイクのストローの太さは、この母乳のスピードを実現するよう調整されています。

マックシェイクを飲むとき、私たちは無意識のうちに赤ん坊の頃を思い出しているそうです。

そして本能的にマックシェイクを欲するようになるそうです。

ある種のドラッグかもしれません。
No. 1 ディーン•フジサワ's correction
  • McShake and Breast Milk
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  • Since there is a McDonald in my university, I sometimes go there and buy McShake.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • McShake is known that it's hard to drink, but there is a reason.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • According to the McDonald's study, the most delicious speed that you feel when you drink something is same as the speed of drinking breast milk.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The diameter of the McShake's straw is adjusted to achieve the breast milk speed.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • When you drink McShake, you might recall the days when you were babies unconsciously.
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  • Furthermore, you might demand it instinctively.
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  • It could be a kind of drug.
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No. 2 rob.walsh.146's correction
  • Since there is a McDonald in my university, I sometimes go there and buy McShake.
  • Since there is a McDonalds in my university, I sometimes go there and buy McShakes.
  • McShake is known that it's hard to drink, but there is a reason.
  • McShakes are known to be hard to drink, but there is a reason.
  • According to the McDonald's study, the most delicious speed that you feel when you drink something is same as the speed of drinking breast milk.
  • According to the McDonald's study, the most delicious speed is the same speed as when when we drank breast milk.
  • The diameter of the McShake's straw is adjusted to achieve the breast milk speed.
  • The diameter of the McShake's straw is adjusted to achieve this speed.
  • When you drink McShake, you might recall the days when you were babies unconsciously.
  • When you drink McShake, you might unconsciously recall the days when you were a baby.
  • McShake could be a kind of drug.
  • McShakes could be a kind of drug.
rob.walsh.146
Should be "McDonald's" sorry!
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
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